Must we know sadness?salty tears with hearty sobsescapingfrom tight throatsMust we treat it with respect?The invisibleforceSending us to our kneeswithout even touching ourskinMercilessly blinds our eyeswith hopelessnessDisentangles usfrom the embraces ofgloryMust we let it in,if it's the only oneknocking?Must we let it tearour heartstrings apart?Does it alwaysneeda company?
awww...are you ok sis? :( cheer up.. the poem is so sad.. *hugs.
ReplyDeleteYou corrected the typo errors. Hurray.
ReplyDelete@shawn there were too many /le facepalm
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ReplyDeleteI miss writing poems. :P But this poems sounds so sad and low. I hope you're ok now after letting out your emotions through this poem. that's how it should be. ;)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is somewhat heartwarming and beautiful at the same time. Hope you'll be happy soon, cheer up!
ReplyDeleteThe poem is beautiful. Writing poems is a good way to let whatever you're feeling out. I hope you're okay! :)
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